Precious Person
You are a diamond in the rough and tumble of a mixed up world. The sparkle of caring mingles with the joy of giving endless hours of listening till that precise moment when the finger of light pierces the dawn of understanding. Night’s anguish disappears in the radiant glow of today as the moon slowly fades away. Tired from travelling many miles of darkness lost in endless tunnels, you stretch out cleansing yourself of unnamed fears in the colours of the rainbow. Blinking away the old concerns you uncurl your fragile self and reach for new vision in the tranquil buzz of another day. And the chirping of songbirds lifts you out of a dream shaped by the story of your life rolling along in the river of springtime hope.
bett
Posted at 07:28h, 01 Septemberthis is so beautiful… thank you Viola
Lorraine Majcen
Posted at 08:58h, 01 SeptemberThank you Viola for such a beautiful poem. I read it several times, to inhale the essence of the message and exhaled with understanding, joy and hope
Sylvia Lee
Posted at 10:46h, 01 SeptemberThank you Viola.
During this trying period, your beautiful poem fills me with hope ~~ like the light of dawn, the colours of rainbow, the vision of another day, and the springtime hope.
Thanks again for your inspiration. Stay safe !
Grace Colella
Posted at 12:51h, 01 SeptemberThank you for this beautiful poem, Viola.
Ana Maria Rodriguez
Posted at 14:38h, 01 SeptemberDon’t fear the darkness, it will uncurl your fragile self, and reach the new vision of another light day!!!
Thank you Viola. Your poem left me with a rainbow daily hope
Linda Rego
Posted at 14:50h, 01 SeptemberI love “…when the finger of light pierces the dawn of understanding.” Thanks once again Viola!
Jacqui
Posted at 18:10h, 01 SeptemberYou write with such beauty and soul. I wish you would put all your poems in a book. I, for one, would gladly pay for one. God bless you for sharing your remarkable talent with us.
maria susanto
Posted at 20:27h, 01 Septemberthank you for the beautiful poem Viola
Dominicus Susilo
Posted at 20:33h, 01 SeptemberWhat an inspiring poem. I read it several times to soak myself into its beauty!
Bonnie azevedo
Posted at 13:38h, 02 SeptemberThank you Viola, such a beautiful poem.
Very inspiring.
God bless
Jean Howard
Posted at 21:31h, 02 SeptemberViola, you must be very prayerfully reflective to create such beautiful poetry.
Lorella D'Cruz
Posted at 07:41h, 03 SeptemberBeautiful, lyrical… we’ve come to expect the best from Viola’s writing, and she never fails to deliver.
Joan Levy Earle
Posted at 10:27h, 03 SeptemberYour poetry is inspiring.
Keep them coming.
Thank you for sharing your creative gift.
Joan Levy Earlfe
Christine Domingo
Posted at 23:25h, 04 SeptemberThank you again, Viola! The imagery in this poem is beautiful, uplifting and inspiring. Instills hope where there is shadow and darkness. Brings to mind the message in the all-time favourite hymn … “And I will raise you up on Eagle’s wings …..”